guyute
Demon Hunter
Every silver lining's got a touch of grey."
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Post by guyute on Jan 13, 2007 2:44:05 GMT -5
Okay, well considering it's only a hundred words, I didn't think a link was all that necessary. So, here it is...someone alert the press, it didn't take me an entire decade to finish. Hope you all enjoy!
Author: Guyute
Title: Snowman
Rating: G...K...whatever it's called now. General audience friendly.
Summary: "And there, amid the falling snow, he felt the thaw."
Snowman
He hated the snow. Even before the associated sting of rejection. Before the bitter chill splintered inside and his heart became winter.
He hated it.
“I love the snow.” And he watched, fascinated, as her breath rolled like smoke, and crystalline melted upon her cheeks, ruddy from the fire that burned within her.
He hated…
…But she was so beautiful.
“Hn, you would.”
Just the slightest turn of her lips and that spark behind her eyes lit anew, and Hiei went completely still as she folded her warmth around him.
And there, amid the falling snow, he felt the thaw.
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Post by adorkablebanana on Jan 13, 2007 15:46:16 GMT -5
Drabbles that aren't 500-600 words are extremely hard for me, but I tried. Hope it doesn't cause eye-bleedage. By that way, I love your drabble, Guyute. Very cute. Contest entry number #2.
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything peeps.
A/N: Entry for the Love like Winter contest at Kindred, the HieixSango board. Kusanagi-no-tsurugi is a legendary Japanese sword, the equivalent to Britain’s Excalibur.
Title: Intrepid
Author: Adorkablebanana
Genre: Crossovers, drabble, one shot.
Rating: PG
Words: 100
Warnings: None, really.
Fandom: InuYasha/Yu Yu Hakusho
Summary: Sango is the guardian of her husband’s sword and is duty bound. Hiei just wants the sword. Sango/Hiei.
Intrepid
Perhaps it was her belly full of child or her bold nerve to protect Kusanagi-no-tsurugi what kept him from killing her. The unwavering form of her gleaming blade, her fierce determination, and her fear reaching his senses.
He lowered his weapon, snow falling softly around them. “Why?”
Sango said nothing, only shook her head. Hiei left it alone--the prize pointless to steal.
Maybe later.
In the spring he came again, and even a lone parent holding her child, she remained bold. “Why?” And the smile she gave was irritating and beautiful.
Interesting. The interest enough kept him sticking around.
The End
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guyute
Demon Hunter
Every silver lining's got a touch of grey."
Posts: 72
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Post by guyute on Jan 14, 2007 2:54:22 GMT -5
Thanks, sweetie! Yours is really good, too! I know what you mean, I liked mine much better before I had to shave 30 words off. I had to reword all sorts of things and it just didn't sound nearly as good when I got done. Well, good luck. Wonderful work!  |
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Post by Cat on Jan 14, 2007 12:28:48 GMT -5
Yay, I actually completed something. (: Bona fortuna to everyone!
Title: His Reason
Author: FlosAmoris/Cat
Rating: G
Summary: Tears flowed from her eyes because she lacked understanding. Tears flowed from his eyes because he knew why. Short 'n' sweet, yo.
His Reason
The others came of their reasons and in so left. He stayed for her. She wept in the night for a lack of understanding. He wept as she slept because he knew why.
There were nights she could not sleep. “Why?” She did not avert her gaze from his while her hand nervously traced circles in the gap of ice between them. It never seemed to dissolve.
"Hn, you’re soft.” A snowflake chose its final destination on his cheek. She watched him intently. These words were inevitable. “For you.” The snowflake melted.
Love like winter melts away, uncovering something beautiful.
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Post by cookiiex on Jan 15, 2007 17:01:05 GMT -5
All of yours are awesome yo [ZOMG it's completedd!] I'll post it here too Ganbette Minna-san! Title:Ignored Authoress: cookiiex Rating: K+ Summary: [" Like you said Hiei, 'love like winter.' "] Enjoy desu~! x-posted@ FF.NET !Kinda AU, you've been warned !IgnoredSango sat outside, watched the snow fell to the ground. She ignored the door sliding and the presence that was beside her. Ignored the way he slid his arm around her waist. Ignored his warm breath against her cold skin. She refused to pay attention to him after that. How could he forget?! Coming empty handed and saying love is like winter? “Sango...” he urged. She puffed her cheeks. “Like you said Hiei, ‘love’s like winter’.” “ Is it MISLETOE TIME!” Hearing Yusuke’s voice, they parted, murmuring curses. They knew they couldn’t ignore it anymore. Just when Yusuke’s not around. |
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guyute
Demon Hunter
Every silver lining's got a touch of grey."
Posts: 72
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Post by guyute on Jan 15, 2007 17:27:10 GMT -5
YAY!!!!!!!! These are all so good! Cat, Cookiiex, AdorkableBanana--you guys rock my virtual socks!  |
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Post by adorkablebanana on Jan 15, 2007 23:07:00 GMT -5
Thank you. Drabble isn't really my thing but I'm glad others like it. ^^
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Post by gaurdianangelsango on Jan 16, 2007 9:59:33 GMT -5
This drabbles are great XD
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Post by Cat on Jan 16, 2007 21:13:59 GMT -5
Drabbles are fun!! Total break from writing controversial essays for my English teacher. Great job, everyone!!! |
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Post by cookiiex on Jan 17, 2007 21:05:55 GMT -5
Nyahh :3 [is dead] if it was up to me though, a longer one shot would be better x3
oh well as long as I get to read Hieango stuffs >D
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Post by Gnist on Jan 19, 2007 20:27:56 GMT -5
Okay. I believe thats everyone. Will get the results out soon!
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Post by somebody on Jan 13, 2008 5:40:01 GMT -5
okay this might be a little late
i hope you guys enjoy this
Author: dragon boy x
Title: Screaming
Rating: anybody doe there might be 2 bad words
Summary: "And there was the resolution of her screaming …..."
Screaming
He hated this place. Even if he was born here. Even if the people had changed and that 1 of the most imports days to him was to happen here. He still hated it even the fact that of all the places why were they here? The weather must have been bad for her health and …. In this place was the reason why he thought love’s like winter. But what he hated the most
was her screaming.
“AHHHHHHHHH.” And he watched, fascinated, and yet in pain to see that he was the cause of her screaming the women who showed him love, and her screaming was in fact hurting him physically by her destroying his hand, the fire burning inside of her that was caused by their love.
He for the first time in his life scared yet content with her screaming
Scared because all her screaming may lead to her death and the cause of her screaming, Content because she was so beautiful barring his child and now giving birth to it.
“Hn, Sango keeping pushing, everything’s going to be okay just keep pushing.”
"I AM PUSHING YOU ASSHOLE! Of all the fucking days you have to say that word I hate you!" Just the slightest turn or sound from her mouth scared him to death. And there she was again screaming as he saw the women from his village try their best and then …….
And there it was, their proof of their love,
He watched, stroking her hair as she sat glistening with sweat, holding their newborn baby boy who was now himself screaming. their son Heero
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Post by flamefoxrose on Jan 13, 2008 15:15:44 GMT -5
Nice.
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Post by somebody on Jan 15, 2008 1:34:49 GMT -5
lol thanks
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Post by flamefoxrose on Jan 15, 2008 16:41:29 GMT -5
you're welcome.
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