guyute
Demon Hunter
Every silver lining's got a touch of grey."
Posts: 72
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Post by guyute on Dec 7, 2007 7:58:13 GMT -5
Yes, I know, I really need to be starting a new story, right?  BUT, it's for Moon Step's birthday, and it just sort of popped out, so we can deal I do believe. It's just a very brief two part story, but I've had fun with it so far. Hope you guys enjoy!  www.fanfiction.net/s/3932513/1/Closer_to_You |
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Post by flamefoxrose on Dec 14, 2007 17:57:47 GMT -5
Wow, that's really good Guyute! A good JinxSango Par. I haven't seen many of those.
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Post by gaurdianangelsango on Dec 15, 2007 2:31:01 GMT -5
It's cute so far!
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Post by flamefoxrose on Dec 16, 2007 14:14:17 GMT -5
^-^
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Post by somebody on Dec 28, 2007 20:30:14 GMT -5
u i always did want see wait it would be like to see a jin vs hiei fight
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Post by flamefoxrose on Jan 1, 2008 16:55:54 GMT -5
That would be cool.
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Post by somebody on Jan 15, 2008 1:49:27 GMT -5
it be like jin running away sorry i mean flying away from hieis dragon cause jin had thoughts about sago
ied be laughing out of that
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Post by flamefoxrose on Jan 15, 2008 8:38:01 GMT -5
somebody, you need to work on your grammer and spelling. (sorry, can't help being a grammer police; To serve and correct!)
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Post by somebody on Jan 15, 2008 21:58:59 GMT -5
ya i know
i make alot of mistakes
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Post by flamefoxrose on Jan 16, 2008 17:07:52 GMT -5
You mean to say:
Yeah, I know; I make a lot of mistakes.
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Post by Cat on Jan 17, 2008 0:34:38 GMT -5
Wow! I love the story. ^^ Funny when it needs to be, & sad at the right moments. It's cool to have an outside perspective. Hmm ... reminds me of a Sappho poem... (I'll try to find it later. The fragment actually kind of goes with your story's theme -- aside from the fact that the third person in Sappho's poem was, err, another woman. *sweatdrop*). Perfect characterization of Jin.  |
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guyute
Demon Hunter
Every silver lining's got a touch of grey."
Posts: 72
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Post by guyute on Jan 17, 2008 23:20:40 GMT -5
Thanks, Cat! I'm glad you like it.
Now if I can just get the time to finish it...
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Post by flamefoxrose on Jan 18, 2008 17:19:29 GMT -5
Lol. Try while teachers or your boss is talking. That's what I do.
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